tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post3419964247664672690..comments2024-03-28T08:43:22.385-05:00Comments on Every goddamn day: 03/28/24: "And so rose up, and went away"Neil Steinberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11468057838260476480noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-5769527546124344302023-03-01T11:29:54.965-06:002023-03-01T11:29:54.965-06:00I think the late poet would be honored - anyone el...I think the late poet would be honored - anyone else making money off her talent, well I’d just shut the door. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-59977364303481243752015-03-02T15:35:36.087-06:002015-03-02T15:35:36.087-06:00Meow. Shouldn't you be back at the Tribune we...Meow. Shouldn't you be back at the Tribune website?Peternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-34022259142553967442015-03-01T18:33:04.011-06:002015-03-01T18:33:04.011-06:00Watch out Tate, you might give yourself a headache...Watch out Tate, you might give yourself a headache, over analyzing. No one is impressed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-48956679118303963232015-03-01T15:44:04.659-06:002015-03-01T15:44:04.659-06:00I don't know if I agree with you about the las...I don't know if I agree with you about the last lines. Ending with "and went away" makes the rest of the poem rather banal in my view, whereas going on raises new issues that need to be explicated and calls into question what exactly is falling apart.<br /><br />Johntatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10088632798195131329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-33420389433811432002015-03-01T15:25:50.971-06:002015-03-01T15:25:50.971-06:00I see your colleaquen Natasha Korecki (sp?) quoted...I see your colleaquen Natasha Korecki (sp?) quoted you in the ST paper today in her Rahm and Rahner article. good oneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-9400786368434863642015-03-01T12:17:23.614-06:002015-03-01T12:17:23.614-06:00Apropos, indeed. Fine choice. Methinks you'v...Apropos, indeed. Fine choice. Methinks you've been hearing the "foundations shifting" for quite a while, though. It must be quite a dilemma for each individual in deciding whether there might be a better street for her or him in the new neighborhood the house finds itself in. Jakashnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-64073310499496016342015-03-01T11:25:13.539-06:002015-03-01T11:25:13.539-06:00A lovely poem. And you paid her for it. Bravo! Put...A lovely poem. And you paid her for it. Bravo! Puts one in mind of an old joke about a chap in an alternate universe sacrificing the promise of a profitable future in lyric poetry for a career in accountancy.<br /><br />Agree with you about the concluding lines: going away doesn't have to mean dying. But didn't you mean "three" rather than "four?"<br /><br />Tom EvansAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3972382144120426476.post-36384427472708032952015-03-01T07:45:24.739-06:002015-03-01T07:45:24.739-06:00Beautiful poem. We can all relate. Some of us beca...Beautiful poem. We can all relate. Some of us because of jobs gone. Some for home lost. Because you chose to include it, I now know a poet I didn't know before. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com