Wednesday, October 8, 2025

Patricia Smith, a Chicago poet 'who writes screams'

Patricia Smith
     A great poet forges a world, then invites you in. Open "Leaves of Grass," and Walt Whitman grabs you by the shirt front and draws you down beside him in the sawdust of some 1850s lumberyard. Robert Frost puts you in his sleigh, pausing in a wintry New England forest, watching the flakes fall in frosty silence.
     And Patricia Smith. Having read "The Intentions of Thunder," her selected life's work, plus new poems, published by Scribner last week and named Tuesday as a finalist for the National Book Award, I see her as a kind of heretofore unimagined superhero: WordWoman perhaps. The door explodes off its hinges, and there she is, in cape and purple tights, blasting the reader with her flamethrower of language, leaving us a Wile E. Coyote-shaped pile of crumbling ash, hesitant index finger frozen in air.
     Even the little intros to each section are concise marvels. At her start in 1991, Smith confesses: "She don't know line break. She don't know iamb. She don't know envoi. She knows stage and slam and people's faces when she poems."
     "When she poems." A three-word phrase to pop in your cheek and nurse all day, like a butterscotch candy.
     At least I could. You might draw back, objecting, "poem is NOT a verb!" Then this book is not for you.
     Pity, because you'll miss her heartbreaking evocations of her murdered father, who sired "a daughter who writes screams." Her mother, Annie Pearl Smith, "the sage of Aliceville, Alabama," unimpressed by the moon landing. "My mother saw the stars only as signals for sleep." Smith can pack a lot into a few words.
     Her own maturing, musky self, then a prolonged subterranean journey through the hellscape of America's racial past — and present — that makes Dante's "Inferno" seem like "Pat the Bunny."
     Widely acclaimed ("the greatest living poet," the Guardian wrote, and who is the competition? Billy Collins looking at clouds?), Smith once worked at the Sun-Times, and snatches Chicago, "city of huge shoulders, thief of tongues," away from Carl Sandburg's overlong embrace. The work reflects her raw, slam poetry origins — more menstrual blood here than you'd get from, say, Mary Oliver. There's a surprisingly stark rendition of the Olive Oyl-Bluto-Popeye love triangle that makes me wish Smith strayed far afield more, though I suppose it could be viewed as more sex, displaced onto Miss Oyl, "a stick interrupted by knees."
     The first quarter is mostly fun, which, like all fun, doesn't last. Starting with Hurricane Katrina, Smith serves up a threnody on race that spares nothing: "When a bullet enters the brain, the head explodes ..."
     Being a white guy reading "The Intentions of Thunder" is like crashing a wedding of people you don't know. You sneak in, help yourself to the buffet and the bar, join in the unfamiliar dancing. Then suddenly a funeral breaks out for a child you also don't know. A red-eyed relative leans in and and hotly tells you who's in that coffin and exactly what happened.

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13 comments:

  1. YOUR review of Patricia Smith’s collection.….. Wow. I MUST get this book. —Becca

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    1. I read it this morning and thought: "too much me and not enough her." But you gotta be who you are, for good and ill.

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    2. Neil - You have terminal awareness - essential to be a great writer. What a column. Fantastic.

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  2. Best book review ever. Thank you for enlightening us and introducing us to Patricia.

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  3. I’m among those who now will search out the book. Thank you.

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  4. These words are so inspiring on the poet who always inspires me and my creative writing students at Wright College. Thanks to both Patricia and Neil!

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  5. Miss Oyl, "a stick interrupted by knees." Oh my, what a description! and, i must say that this is the most elegantly written column i've ever seen you do.

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    1. Know someone who looks exactly like that. A perfect description.
      In fact, she's even been compared to Olive Oyl in the past.

      But we've been close friends for sixty years...since college days.
      Some things are best left unspoken. And that's one of them.

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  6. Not so much into poetry anymore, but I put this on ILL at my library. Your recommendation carries weight.

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  7. Poetry is one of my many weaknesses. Reading this review of Patricia Smith's book has forced me to reflect on the power of words. A friend who taught poetry at an urban high school dominated by Black teenagers struggling with real life experiences shared this poem by Robert White, one of his students:

    A POEM
    Standing alone,
    On white lined paper,
    Naked
    To show its innocence,
    It eats the ink
    Of life and death
    And good and bad.
    Behold!

    Neil, the inclusion of Billy Collins with the likes of Walt Whitman and Robert Frost should not be understated. Collins' "Introduction to Poetry" made a profound dent on my casual ignorance. Another person I hold in high esteem is Nikki Giovanni for her poem "Ego Tripping". Thank you for this extraordinary and personal testament to this great poet.

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    1. Billy Collins: his poems seem easy to read and understand AND are some of the most moving poems I've ever read. (And I am an old high school English teacher.) Collins was the Poet Laureate a few years back. Thanks for mentioning Billy; he should have a wider audience.

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  8. I have never ordered a book of poetry ....I did today!

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  9. Thank you all! Neil, thanks for always hanging out in my corner.

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